But publicly I hide.
Tears I can't release.
Until my shaking cease.
Trembling alone in my room
Trying to stop the tears
that flow freely down my face.
Crying, racking, painful sobs
are better you know,
because all see your pain.
Crying, shaking, silently,
is the worst
because no one hears
at all.
Written: Wednesday, August 29, 2012
The 4th line is weird, but I think you know that. You don't want to say "ceases" because then it wouldn't rhyme, but it's not really right the way it is. Try "The tears I can't release, my shakes I cannot cease." Maybe?
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