Pain, anger and hate
roiling emotions
With no room to hesitate.
Pain in the sense
of not being true.
When no one to talk with
or to be sincere with you.
Anger coming in waves
red, black, red, black.
Not trusting your emotions;
Your friendshipe become raized.
Hate that blackens
your vision to night.
You try hard to release
And to stand and fight.
Written: Monday, August 27, 2012

Good, but you might want to check the 6th line. It sounds weird to me.
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