I will be whole.
As long as you love me
I will have somewhere to go.
As long as you love me,
I will be sane.
As long as you love me
I will ignore any pain.
Your love is like a fountain,
poring forth water,
gently streaming down
like the love for a daughter.
Caress me sweet,,
hold me tight,
Don't let me go,
Not today nor this night.
The stars in the sky
are plentiful, my love.
But are they equal to
that of a turtle dove?
You claim to love me, as much as any man
could love a woman.
So is it to much to ask
for you to prove it?
As long as you love me,
I will be whole.
As long as you love me
I will have somewhere to go.
As long as you love me,
I will be sane.
As long as you love me
I will ignore any pain.
Don't forget the "e" in the title, and the 5th line of the 2nd stanza has 1 too many commas, but other than that, it's good. My favorite part is the first 4 lines of the second stanza.
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